Octapodi

It was a normal and beautiful day for an octopus couple in love, like always they were floating, dancing and huging in their fish tunk without any preocupation. Suddenly a horrible and wicked hand appear in their beautiful home and takes away the gorgeous purple female octopus, his husband can't believe it, the pain was like they have take out of him his heart; however he decided not to give up and go to find her. He dashed to the truck and grabbed of it, he sees the driver and begin to fight with him, it was an epic fight even the delicate female octopus begin to fight and tried to escape with her handsome and corageous husband. Finally they are free, what a happy moment for them; yet they are not save, because suddenly and horrible bird takes away the male octopus and now is the beautiful female octopus who go to save him; they know that it doesn't matter what happen they will be always a way of being togetther, even when they would be all time against the world, fighting for their love.

 

This paragraph was one of the last that I did in the semester, I really love doing this story, because I like telling stories, but also because in this text I could improve my writting, specially in terms of comas, semi-colon, and all kind of punctuation. Also I could learn vocabulary, and how to write an interesting text.